Psh, don't depreciate your work. It's good stuff - no matter what language you're used to reading (and I read a lot of the 'masters' in French, Spanish, & English, so I feel somewhat qualified to pose an opinion).
I really like the imagery you invoked, and yes, the narrative voice is strong and clear.
I'm flattered you're honored, but having someone like me read your work sure isn't an 'honor.'